The Seasons

The four seasons in earth

Rain drops falling down

The watery sparkles from them

kicks the light out to other rain drops

Sorrow and sadness are the dictators those days

A time to contemplate what you have

The darkness of it making hard to reach the light

A big bright sun at night

A time to have fun and fear

where you could experience

Unknown emotions

A big bright moon

A beacon to a lover's true love

A rose opening in the morning

So delicate but yet so beautiful to love

A red dark color of love

More flowers opening through the day

More dreams have begun to appear

The Leaf of the trees falling down

A nice dusk at the end of the day

The sensation of loneliness and love

A time to drink chocolate at day

A time to think about life these days

A snow flake falling down

The winds are stronger now

In those times

You want to find a source of heat

either Love or blankets may work 

There are four seasons to contemplate

Each one has it's different meaning

The tilt of the earth to make this possible

A tilt that makes every human being

Think in four different stages

Reviews

[ANTO]

"The tilt of the earth to make this possible
A tilt that makes every human being
Think in four different stages" - wow - the truth in your writings is the iron in the velvet glove Lizardo - we do compartmentalise our lives, year in and year out - shoehorning them into one of four quandrants and watching them spin by like tracks on a CD
Thanks for sharing Lizardo

[Lizardo]

Thank you for your kind words ANTO, I'm glad you like it

[The StoryTeller]

Lol, how old are you Lizardo? This is a little bit grown up. Love can make you warm (both physical and just regular, talking, etc.) I liked it. It did show the 4 parts of nature, and it threw in other things, like the emotions in those seasons, and how those emotions and the things that happen in those seasons demonstrate the meaning of those seasons. I don't know if you followed that, but good job.

[Lizardo]

I did follow that xD I'm 15 and thank you so much for your kind words !

[The StoryTeller]

Okay, glad you could follow that. Half the time I can't even follow myself. And yeah, they're not really kind words, they're honest words. :) And wow, such deep writing for one so young. Of course, I'm 15 too, but about to be 16. (Like that makes any difference.) Anyways, good job.

[Afraa]

I am having a hard time believing you are fifteen, writing such words, Lizardo. The way you described each season is something else. I loved the detail and images that came to mind. I am a sucker for such poems, you see. This piece has both a light and dark side, which I find very interesting. Your rhyming scheme is beautiful as well. This is making its way onto my favorites!!!

[Lizardo]

I'm glad you liked it Afraa! thank you so much for your kind words and for having this poem in your favorites :)

[Afraa]

You have added one of mine to your favorites lately. But don't think I added this to my favorites just because of that. This piece was just destined to go on my favorites!

[Lizardo]

Then I really appreciete it :)

[DoormanDan]

This poem does a great job at describing some of the beautiful aspects of nature, and as usual, delivers a very uplifting message. This is a wonderful poem! :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Dan! I'm glad you liked it :)

[Daisy]

wonderful.... good job...............................

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Beautiful....again a lovely piece from you.... "The tilt of the earth to make this possible
A tilt that makes every human being
Think in four different stages"............. good one

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much I really appreciate it friend :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

You are welcome friend :)

[Cool Girl]

I like it a lot!
I like the last stanza the most:)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it :)

[Cool Girl]

Welcome!! :)