Something Out Of Something

I hear you when you call

I yell for love but he doesn't come

I'll be something out of something

A beggining of a beggining

A next generation of a generation

The sky is bright

I see your light

My soul slowly dies

I see the light

They say that you won't..

Prove them wrong before I go..

I see you from up above

In a place where peace is comfort

The light in the dark

Trials of life

The moon up high

The sun down below

I see you standing in the middle of both

I was something out of something

From my father and my mother 

I hear your cries in my ears

Don't forget love..

The words are words

Simple thoughts in the human mind

Yet they carry more weight then a planet

Words can work, Words can hurt

Everything in life

Depends on how you use it

I see you down alone

The thousand cries the your soul gives

From outside you look so nice and happy

From insinde your a dying soul

The sky is bright

I saw your light

If the stars die

I will be your star from up above

Come closer I can't hear you

My thoughts are overflown

The light, yes the light

A simple word but with light

The dark a simple word

But carries darkness in within

I'm something out of something

Created by a creation

From a simple evolution that took years ago

I walked through earth

I died in earth

So now, Listen to me

Don't be afraid

'Cause even darkness has it's own light..

Reviews

[Falling Leaf.]

Almost lyrical in nature, with wise and thoughtful reflection throughout, I particularly love the dawn of self-awareness in the two first lines of the last stanza. I like the maturity and contemplative tone of this piece, it's worth saving and reading again, a treat to the mind when it wants to wander and romp, a lot of great life lessons here, don't forget love, don't forget family, and most importantly you are your own strength and light. A lot of food for thought here. Thank you for sharing the stunning poetry~

[Lizardo]

Thank you for such kind words, I really appreciete it :)

[Falling Leaf.]

No trouble at all. :)

[Emily]

I love the first lines!
Keep it up!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I really appreciete it!

[Daisy]

it's really an amazing concept..... "i'm something out of something" totally awesome.... good job.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, I really appreciete it :)

[Vanesa Markovic]

Such deep works for someone so young, well done Lizardo!
-VM

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Vanesa, I really appreciete your kind words!

[Sami Khalil]

There are so many thoughts and layers in your poems that is appreciated...Bravo, sir...:)...........

[Lizardo]

thank you so much for your kind words Sami, I like to think how other people would fit in the world and how their reactions would be, thats why I write many stuff like this.
Thank you Sami, you are apprecieted it friend :)

[Sami Khalil]

I understand. You are welcome...:)..................

[DoormanDan]

I think this might be one of your very best poems out of all of them! I think this one will strike a chord in many people's hearts, because after all, we all want to be something out of something, do we not? This is fantastic!

[Lizardo]

I think that this one is the one that I enjoyed out of all writing, I picture a lonely child sitting somewhere where he was crying and all of that...
Thank you so much Dan! I really appreciete it :)

[Cool Girl]

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you CG :) I wrote this one with all of my heart

[Cool Girl]

Ur welcome :)

[Valentine]

I was taught that God is the Light that brings peace in the darkest of nights. No matter how dark things may look, there always is tomorrow and the chance it will bring light out of the darkness. Kathie

[Lizardo]

True, The will always be a tomorrow and the light will never disappear.
Thank you so much Valentine, I really appreciete it!