Quiet

I sit in a chair

Were everything is dark

My memories flying around me

Rocking the tide in and out to shore

I go to school

Never talk to anyone

I'm a quiet person

I have to carry the dumb things

That the people who don't know me say

Carrying a pain in my back

Isn't horrible to carry depression?

The next day I wake up again

Hoping that the last day

Was all a bad dream

I wake up with many dreams in my heart

But then I realize that I'm going to fail again

Everytime I get up and feel that everything is going alright

Theres always something that pushes me down

And I've become so numb

The stars are my friends

The see what I see

My friends aren't like the ones

That I have Far away

Like prison this is

Unable to move or go where I want

Only showing me what they want to show

Not letting me think outside the box

In a society

Were people only think for themself

They don't think about the others that are having

A bad time in life

where did the love go?

Everyone trying to save their own skin

But is it really worth it?

The only thing we do, is sink this world more

Another day and month and Year

Things never change

A Cycle of a Recycle

But I know someday

Good things will come

When I wake up

I see my shadow

I see a Ghost

I see myself in both

Reviews

[Fornever Always]

Where people*

Wow. I'm really pretty quiet too. I like how you've put bits of your life into hidden words.
"Another day and month and Year
Things never change
A Cycle of a Recycle
But I know someday
Good things will come" I will quote you on that sir and if someday you become famous this may be the remembered words I hope. I feel the same way and that quote is amazing. Never stop writing~!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for your kind words friend! I really appreciete it !

[Moonlight]

Each word you say through this is equally true for me... It is really a beautiful piece. Each word here is brimming with the feelings of how an outcast feels. Just how dejected people can make someone feel! I truly loved it.... Good work on this one! :)

And the last lines:
"When I wake up
I see my shadow
I see a Ghost
I see myself in both "..... they speak volumes.

"Every time I get up and feel that everything is going alright
There's always something that pushes me down
And I've become so numb

The stars are my friends
They see what I see"

I can truly relate to this! Thanks for sharing! :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you for reviewing :)

[Emily]

I like the idea of this poem!
Well done!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, I really appreciete it!

[Sami Khalil]

"The stars are my friends
The see what I see
My friends aren't like the ones
That I have Far away
Like prison this is"

In the quiet of it all, we discover things that we never noticed. We evaluate things too more wisely. Bravo, sir...:)............

[Lizardo]

Thank you again Sami, I really appreciete it :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........................

[Cool Girl]

This poem really reminds me of myself..again...
I feel this way very often, even today. The kids at school say things that they don't even know hurt me. They throw their words around carelessly. The kids at school roll their eyes at me just because Im not "one of them." Don't they know that I'm nice? I guess they just don't have the time to find out. They label me. To them, I am not "Aless." To them, I am "a loner." To them, Im "a nobody." To them,Im a ghost."

[Lizardo]

That's how I feel..

[Cool Girl]

I guess that's something we have in common...

[DoormanDan]

This is fantastic. I think the emotions bleed out of this poem more than any other poem you've written so far. I can sort of relate to you with this piece, I'm very introverted. The best thing to do is just continue being yourself, and not what the rest of the world wants you to be. Keep up the fantastic work! :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Dan, Me too I'm kind of an introvert too, but it doesn't matter really