If So

If So

A Poem by Lizardo
"

Atlas Genius

"
Another day to wake up
Another day to suffer the heat from the sun

A normal morning it is
Sun up high
making my breakfast
Thinking about life and about my friends
then comes the critiscim from them
I can't have a momen of piece
Without people throwing me darts
If so?
If so?
I don't care
If so?
If so?
All I care about is my friends and family
I waste my oxigen on them...

Everybody is faking who they really are
Tell me your experiences
Cause I don't know the wrong from the right
Fake or real
How can I know people?

We make false statement about
People who we don't know
People walking carelessly in the streets
Not even wondering about the others around them

If so?
If so?
I wonder about my life..
If so?
If so?
We are all on the same ship...

Society and people who I don't know
Critizice me for the away I am
If so?
If so?
I'm like this and I will never change
If so? 
If so?
Another day in my life...

Tell me only the truth
'Cause I can't stand the fake
All I want is for people
To understan each other
And put themselfs
In the shoes of the others
And see how it all turns out

They'll se how we suffer
They'll finally understad our worlds..

© 2015 Lizardo


Author's Note

Lizardo
On this one, I got inspired but a song called:
''If So'' By Atlas Genius (It's a really good band, I think you should check it ou)

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Well, you probably just logged back on to your account, and clicked on reviews. Now, you see that it's me who has commented. You are like "Holy Cow" because my comment is long.You read the first two sentences and smile because I guessed right. Now you begin to read on, and continue to smile. You are astonished at how dorky I am :p You are wondering when I'm going to write about your poem, and I promise that it will be in a few sentences. You are glad to be my friend, and you continue to read on. You wonder why Im writing like this. I think you're poem is good! Very truthful:) Now you smile because that is what I normally say about all your work. You are nearing the end of the comment, and you still smile. Now you go and see if there are any other comments. You smile to see you have about 2 or more to read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

hahahahaha evertyhing about that happened xD
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Yes! You must be very similar to me then. I basically just thought about what I would do if I read t.. read more

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Added on January 12, 2015
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