Wait for it

Just something random

Talking to myself
Is like talking to the stars
They don't answer you
But they here you

I'm waiting for my dream to come
I'm waiting to see the world in peace

Happiness floats in the gust of the darkness
You just need to find your way through it
To find it

Don't you ever feel happy when
You give something to someone
And they feel happy for that gift?
Helping others is my Coldplay
Sweet and elegant

We watch the space around us
And think about life

The human brain is a puzzle
But it also plays with us
Hiding itself from science

When we le it all go
Burst of colors come out
And our vision becomes happy

Land and water separates us all
But what brings us together
Is our writing
Stories and poem
That go to our hearts

So I'll wait for it
I'll wait for new writing
To learn from it
To help me in my need

I'll wait for it
I'll wait for love to come
I'll wait for my world to be in peace

Author's Note

Something random

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

I can relate to this. The ending is really emotional:) Nice job!

[Lizardo]

Thank you CG! I'm really glad that you liked it :)

[Cool Girl]

Welcome! :)

[Sarah Carswell]

The hopefulness of this poem made me smile, and I think it's great that you have that hope even if it seems random.

There were a couple of mistakes I think you should know of: you wrote "But they here you" and I think you really meant "But they hear you"; "When we le it go" should be "When we let it go".

Just a few things to change but I still enjoyed it. Keep writing because you have a talent and it would be such a waste of potential if you stopped.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Sarah, I'll fix those mistakes, thank you a lot

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this...all of the poets longing for that same peace...but we surely hope we won't have to wait too long...would like to see some semblance of peace in our lifetime.

[Lizardo]

Thank you for your review Jacob, I really appreciete it

[Moonlight]

I really loved this poem. Randomness is sometimes amazing and you nailed that right here!

'Helping others is my Coldplay
Sweet and elegant '................. I loved this line! And throughout the poem all i did was smile! So yeah, I enjoyed it a lot!

Then again, there were these lines :

" Happiness floats in the gust of the darkness
You just need to find your way through it
To find it"

&

"Land and water separates us all
But what brings us together
Is our writing
Stories and poem
That go to our hearts "

simple words speaking volumes! Amazing work! Thank you for sharing! :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much for this amazing review, I really appreciete it :)

[Moonlight]

You are welcome :)