Where does it go?

Where does it go?

A Poem by Lizardo
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When love is gone, Where does it go?

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After all we've been through
You broke it down
I've gotta know
Can we work it out?
There's no time..
But when I ask you
You don't answer me..
After this
What's next?
I feel numb
Nothing else matters
I want to be with you
I've gotta know
Can we work it out?
Let's try everything out..
I want to be with you
But you said
''When love is gone, where does it go?''
What do we do, what do we do?
After this
I think I cant let this pass
But you said
''When love is gone, Where does it go?''
Where does it go....

© 2015 Lizardo


Author's Note

Lizardo
I got the inspiration from a song called:
''AfterLife'' By Arcade Fire

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When it dies, it disappears and we waste our time if we start looking for it. For 15 I am happy to see you are interested in writing. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I really appreciete it
You were able to totally express the lost soul whose love is going. the reptition is very effective at conveying the frustration of being unable to answer the question of what happens to love that moves/dies or simply fades - great questions asked . have to listen to that track you cited. I see we share 3 musical tastes - The Killers, Coldplay and Muse Lizardo :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

You learned yellow on the guitar? that is so cool! I learned Clocks on the piano
ANTO

9 Years Ago

Oh man Clocks rocks ! - hey Im a poet and I didnt know-it
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

That's really a cool song haha
Love it! So emotional! Great job:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Welcome! :)
This is a great write. I'm actually in the feeling of this right now. It kind of explains how I feel too. You should check out my work, called At The Moment. Keep writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

I will right now, Thank you so much
Heartful5160

9 Years Ago

Your welcome!

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Added on January 10, 2015
Last Updated on January 10, 2015
Tags: Life, Teen, Love, Romance, Sorrow, Darkness

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