On The Road

When we sometimes feel that there's nowhere to go

While I'm on the road

I left home

Problem after problem in my home

On the road

Run out of gas and I need to go

Far away, Far away from this mess

The moon shines at night

She's my only friend tonight

Freezing and trying to push my car

I'm stuck and every last breath seems the last

I see other people

Happily living their lives

While I'm here, struggling to be happy

Other peoples lives seem more

Interesting then mine...

On the road 

out of gas

Out of nothing

Can't take a step

or else I fall down

Can' talk 

Or else I get mock around

Can't do what I want

Or else I see them getting mad

The stars are watching my

Terror from above

I wonder what they think of me

I'm on this lonely road

This looks like my life

lonely, out of nothing, no where to go

Numbness, Dark and lonely...

But I see other people

Living happily after life

And I'm here

Struggling to run from my fears

And I can't even move

Ran out of nothing

Can't bring myself up

Can't look at light

Or else I can't see darkness

Can't have both at this time

When I walk

I fall down

When I talk

I get mock around

When I watch

I get yelled

When I give my opinion

They are there, trying to bring me down

Society is at a bottom of a pit

They don't want nobody to get our of here

So they bring everyone down

one by one

destroying the dreams

of children and adults

tell me

what's the point of this?

On the road

Out of mind

Out of gas

Out of me...

Author's Note

Out of all my poems, I think this one is by far the one that Enyojed more writing

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

Very strong emotions! Nicely penned, Lizardo:) this is definately one of your stronger pieces.

[Lizardo]

I was thinking about that, maybe it is.
Thank you so much Bff :)

[Cool Girl]

You are so very welcome Bff :)

[Jimmy Yetts]

Very strong closing.
This piece creates a haunting atmosphere, Lizardo.
Worthy effort, young poet!

[Lizardo]

Thank you Frankie, I really appreciete it