A Star

A Star

A Poem by Lizardo
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A shiny light the sparks the mind in the human heart

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Shiny light
That you shine at night
Little star
Far away you are
Watching over us
Like a guardian angel
Bright star
That you appear at night
With your burning light
Sparking a fire in the human heart
Little star
That you appear late at night
What a joy it is
When you come to visit me again with your light
I wait for you the whole day
Just to see your sparkling light
In my night sky
I'm still waiting for you
My shiny star
Please come back again 
every night
I will never forget you
My shiny light

© 2015 Lizardo


Author's Note

Lizardo
This is very different from what I usually do, I can feel the difference from the distance lol
But thought to give a try to something new

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I like it, its like another version of Twinkle, Twinkle little star - its charming, relatable, and memorable. Keep writing! It doesn't hurt to try to broaden our style - this is how we come better poets, and people as a whole.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much SLY Girl, I really appreciete it
SLY Girl

9 Years Ago

You're welcome, I enjoy your poems! :)
This is indeed different! I love it though:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Welcome! :)
I can remember when I was young, my bed was next to the window. When I couldn't sleep I would look out and see the same star in the same place. This poem brought back some memories. Good one Lizardo.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Tim, I really apprecite it.
You know, I usually do that, with the difference.. read more
It's not so easy having a little star,

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Very true, very true..
A lovely dedication to one who has changed your life for the better Lizardo - may they always be in your life my friend.
:))

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you ANTO, I had my doubts on this one

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Added on January 10, 2015
Last Updated on January 10, 2015
Tags: Life, Star, Universe

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Lizardo
Lizardo

LA , CA



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