Some Thoughts about Life

I think about this all the time

And there we are 

Talking to someone

Waiting for the answered in your mind

To your question

Be said by them

In the deepest part of our heart

We want something to happen

But we denied all of that thought from our heart

We see people walking the streets

Probably make false statements about them

Without even knowing them

But it's not our fault

It's the brain that jumps to conclusions

That are sometimes Wrong or correct

Happpiness is something we feel

Something we don't want to let it go

But in the deepest part of our soul

We feel Sadness at the same time we feel happiness

Because we know that happiness will go at sometime of our life

We usually don't want to let go of someone

But we feel like we could be better without them

We see the world so real

That we think that it's all a computer game

with millions of pixels we can't even differ

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Thoughts are constantly forming in our minds as life unfolds in mystery and surprises. Many people deal with them differently with differentiated approahes. Then we form our decisions that involve our will. An excellent write...:).....

[Lizardo]

Words of wisdom Sami, I really appreciete it thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Thank you kindly. You are welcome...:)....

[Clockwork]

I agree with jacob, life truly is a balancing act. Your piece highlights the decisions we have to make every day to achieve that balance. As your third stanza suggests, we are constantly faced with assumptions about people. These conclusions come from our experiences more often than not. Our job is to sift through our thoughts so we can accept the deepest feelings of our hearts.

The core of your poem is very caring--your a poet who truly things about the world, and how others fit into that world.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Clockwork, I really appreciete it

[jacob erin-cilberto]

life is such a balancing act---and opposites balance each other, for every happiness there is sorrow...

and people deal with issues constantly in life, with major tough decisions, and it does not help anyone if we put more pressure on them by judging them...
we often jump to conclusions...make assumptions about people...and the best thing is to try to give everyone a fair break...
give the benefit of the doubt.

the content is so strong in this...does need editing to smooth it out...but there is a good piece of poetry here...

jacob

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Jacob, I really appreciete it

[Matching Socks]

Very deep thoughts Lizardo.
I'm amazed at your depth and maturity given how young you are.
Well done.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Ana, I really appreciete it

[Heartful5160]

I love this piece! Great job! On that one part, where you were talking about how when we see someone walking on the street, we judge them off of appearances and we don't even take the time to get to know them for who there really are. It's pretty sad. But if you check out my one piece I added a little more about that issue. It's called I'm Just Color Blind! I would love for you to check it out. But what a great write you have there! Keep writing!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! Okay I'll go check it right now :)

[Heartful5160]

Great! I can't wait for you to read it!