Some Thoughts about Life

I think about this all the time

And there we are 

Talking to someone

Waiting for the answered in your mind

To your question

Be said by them

In the deepest part of our heart

We want something to happen

But we denied all of that thought from our heart

We see people walking the streets

Probably make false statements about them

Without even knowing them

But it's not our fault

It's the brain that jumps to conclusions

That are sometimes Wrong or correct

Happpiness is something we feel

Something we don't want to let it go

But in the deepest part of our soul

We feel Sadness at the same time we feel happiness

Because we know that happiness will go at sometime of our life

We usually don't want to let go of someone

But we feel like we could be better without them

We see the world so real

That we think that it's all a computer game

with millions of pixels we can't even differ

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Great job Lizardo!
I really like how your English is getting much better, great poem and very inspirational.
I see the great potential in your words.
Keep up the great work and soon you'll become a great author!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much C.Lee! I will try and thank you a lot!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

your welcome.

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

Very great poem, and thought provoking. Great job. (see Vanesa Markovics review) I noticed that too but noticed she already told you) Awesome job, keep it up.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Vanesa Markovic]

Quick question.
Did you mean false statements?

Otherwise a very honest write, something I always appreciate!
-VM

[Lizardo]

Yeah false statements I miss that, Thank you so much

[Wordydistance]

Very sincere and direct. Nice job.

[Lizardo]

Thamk you so much

[DoormanDan]

You are very good at writing poems like this one! I absolutely positively LOVE this poem! NEVAR STOP WRITING! :)

[Lizardo]

Coming from you, I really means a lot :) Thank you so much Dan

[DoormanDan]

You are very welcome :)

[Arthur Martel]

It's hard to believe that you are 15! I thought I was young! Could you be past the ignorance is bliss stage in your life my friend? This piece certainly suggests that!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Martin! I really appreciete your review :) and thank you a lot

[Cool Girl]

Golly, this is remarkable! I love the first stanza:) My mind can hardly process how talented you are:)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much BFF :)

[Cool Girl]

Haha, you're welcome, BFF!!!

[ANTO]

I love how deep you delve Lizardo, its way too deep for me - Im a shallow guy lol
but this :
"But it's not our fault
It's the brain that jumps to conclusions
That are sometimes Wrong or correct" - I had an issue with and that nothing to do wth you - it made me think is all - do WE judge or does the brain do that for us - hmmm... very interesting

The end is enigmatic - we could be in a simulation - doesnt have to be a game - the new versions of VR (Occulus Rift) are testament to the real nature of new computing power, and once quantum computers come along there may indeed be NO difference.

You never skirt around the danger zone Lizardo - you're so in tune with yourself. Its awesome.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much ANTO, I really appreciete it. The Occulus rift? it's very true and the quantum computers too

[CA Anurag Sharma]

i feel what you have written is quite true.... a very well written piece....true depiction of emotions....

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Anurag, I really appreciete it

[Confuser]

It's interesting that you write being hapy and sad is the same, I suppose you mean chemically in our brains. Great emotional power in your writing. I will never get over your age in comparison to your maturity and the words packed full of starbursts...with millions of pixels we can't even differ. Makes me wonder if one day that is how it may truly be.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, I really appreciate it

[Confuser]

You are welcome Lizardo. Have a wonderful day.