The Station

A station where our thouthgs come and go

On the east side of my mind

Theres a train station

Where my thoughts go

To far off destinations

So, So that they can be happy somewhere else

Theres a T.V in my mind Where I can

Watch Every defeat and mistake

That I've ever done in my life

I see pictures of my life 

In my Mind

Passing like they have 

nothing else to do

Sorrow keeps me in jail

And tells me to follow his rules

So that I can feel his presence 

And he'll never have to go and

find a new home

But While I'm here

Still waiting in this mess up station

Where I see my thoughts come and go

To far off destinations

In the real world

I'm fighting for my life

'Cause I  still want to live

And this illness

Is keeping in this station

But I can't react

Since I'm still trying to hold my world

To no let brake apart

But this thing

Is consuming me 

And the only thing that I can do now is

Wait for my train to come

And go somewhere else

Leave my body behing 

And go meet God himself...

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

An intriguing, imaginative bit of writing--worthy of your effort in creating it, Lizardo; worthy of my time spent reading.
Bravo, young man!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Frankie! I really appreciete it

[NeiL ArandA]

Good imagination of someone waiting for their train to come in life. A train perhaps is used by the author to represents a time in our life when we have to leave this earth and go the next life.

[Lizardo]

That's how I put it in there, Thank you so much!

[Cool Girl]

You have a good imagination! I like this!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Cool Girl]

You are so very welcome!

[Sami Khalil]

A well worth reading poem with great imagination. Excellent...:)..................

[Lizardo]

Thank you Sami, I really appreciete it :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....................

[Bare Trees]

Sad to read this and a bit scary as well. I sincerely hope this is just a poem and not a declaration of a future event for you. Regardless, this is well thought out and written.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Tim, I really appreciete it

[ANTO]

But While I'm here
Still waiting in this mess up station
Where I see my thoughts come and go
To far off destinations

I have a WOW here Lizardo - the imagination behind this - of the thoughts shuttling around in wee stations that we can board or ignore is right up my street. So left field. I love this kind of stuff. A new fav. thanks for sharing

[Lizardo]

Thank you for reviewing ANTO, I really appreciete it