Bigger Stronger

Theres a shadow in my backyard

Watching every yard that I walk

Fear is consuming me from the inside

I travel side to side

To believe that this all a dream

I think I wanna be stronger

When the wind starts blowing inside

You know that times has come

has come to face Fear

Head to head in an endless battle for your mind

A thousand thoughts float on your mind

This is a game where theres no winner nor loser

I want to be Stronger and brave

To face anyone who stands on my way

And never back down when the guns are unload

The Hurricane of problems 

Destroyed my house 

And broke it down

Now I don't have nothing to loose...

I want to be stronger

and fight my way back up

Theres a fear the lives in all of us

It's something we don't understand

But we can defeat it

Slaved to fear we all are

I want to bigger and stronger

To fight this law

And become new 

And safe from the fear

that tortures us all

Bigger and Stronger....

 

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

Fear is a menacing giants that towers on everyone one. Facing and slaying these giants takes lots of courage and strength.

[Lizardo]

It is true it takes courage and strength to defea them. but we can
Thank you for your thouthgs

[Jimmy Yetts]

Fear cannot long survive the presence of genuine love.
And so, Lizardo, I tell you this in all seriousness: Be a lover, not a fighter.
Enjoyed your work, young poet.

[Lizardo]

Thank you Frankie

[Confuser]

Great writing; to ovecome fear - a big order for anyone. I enjoyed reading the honesty in your words. Thank you Lizardo. Keep writing.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much

[Confuser]

Y/W.............great writing!

[Cool Girl]

I like this...a lot....I think...not sure...too hyper...drank coffee:)

hahahahaha, okay jk jk jk.... This poem was super great! It was very well written and I didn't find many spelling mistakes which is good. Keep working hard!

Your bff,

C.G.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Bff!

[Cool Girl]

You are so welcome, Bff!

[Bare Trees]

To be stronger in mind is a goal worth plenty of merit. Your story shows it is possible to overcome the shadows that plague us from time to time. Well done.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much

[Bare Trees]

You're welcome.

[Sarah Carswell]

Wow, that's a very powerful message and I love the beat that the prom seems to have (I may have imagined it). Either way I really liked it.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, I really appreciete it