In The Shadows

A Poem by Lizardo

While I'm feeling bad about life

You come and whisper my name

To make me sink down

And now I don't care

Because I'm in the shadows

I see many with me in this walk

and when I walk I have the feeling

That I'm being drowned underwater

I feel Pain and sorrow kicking me

I wonder when is this pain

Going to stop?

There is no moon nor sunshine in this place

In this place is where the broken dreams come

And my head is staring to hurt

Since I'm the one who chose the shadows

Over Me

My emotions burst

To the sky

Colors making the sky colorful

And I feel that in this place

Nobody is going to reach for me

I'm stuck in the dark....

But then you come

Like a present from god towards me

Bringing Joy

That was stollen from my heart

And now the shadows disappear

The sun rises again

I can see the ground again

And now I see

your beautiful face facing me

Finally the madness has stop

But I need to be careful this time

Who knows if even you, the one who saved

My heart from the pain

Can bring me pain too

© 2015 Lizardo

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Vishuddha

A lovely poem with a poignant ending. You did mess up one of your best lines:
"In this place is where the broken dreams come" Get that "is" out! And, what happened here:
"Finally the madness has stop" ? You need to caress these little beauties a few more times before letting them fly. They deserve it!

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Alright I will check those! Thank you so much!

NeiL ArandA

There are people sometimes sent to us by some providential hand to bring that colours back into our life. We do sometimes felt trapped and the only colors that exist in that realm are dark and gray.. Rain and thunders comes then after that a promise of sunshine and rainbows of hope and new beginning..