Lights Come

When your falling down

Lights come

When your falling down

Lights come

How can I be like this?

Who am I?

Are question not even us can understand

Days shine

Nights are dark

And we follow the lead of time

Work and go to study

Order at our hand

Then comes a day

When everything sundenlly falls  down

It takes an awful lot of time

to build something beautiful

But it takes a second

To let it all go down

World is in need

Everyone trying to be better then others

Our world is beautiful

We live another day in it

Why can't we see?

The ones who are in need...

Money corrupts people...

And power darkens their soul...

The Path is one way 

But we usually tend to

Make it go other ways

When we're falling down

Lights come....

When we're falling down

Lights come....

So I'll go live my life

We only live once

Time to make the shot worth it

Never go down

Never fall down

When we do 

We come back stronger

Leave the problems that are not worth it

Behing

The darkness may seem powerful

But it takes a tiny light

To defeat it

When we're falling down

Lights come..

So come on

When we fall down

We'll come back stronger

We'll just keep on Rising.....

Keep on Rising...

Keep on Rising...

Keep on Rising...

Reviews

[David Ung]

This poem is great. It has a positive message that everyone should know! Good job, keep it up.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much David, I really appreciete it

[DoormanDan]

I love the line "It takes an awful long time to build something beautiful." The message of this poem is very positive. Once again, good job Lizardo! :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you a lot Dan! I really appreciete it :)

[DoormanDan]

No problem :)

[Cool Girl]

I love the ending! It is so emotional and meaningful! I think trying something different has really worked out for you:)

[Lizardo]

I think it did, Thank you very much !:)

[Cool Girl]

You areso very welcome!

[Cool Girl]

Ugh, I meant to write are so instead of areso....

[Lizardo]

haha don't worry :)