Take Me Down

I saw the birth of earth

And the chaos of it

Saw many thing That I'm not proud of

The world is spining in my head

Yelling at me to keep going no matter what

Fell down again

Don't have time to whine about

Got up again

and kept going

I'm not going to get lost

In the moment of waiting for them fall down

The earthquake rumbled through the city 

I fell down again

But that doesn't matter

I got up again

I chase the sun

Running kilometers throught earth

Meeting new people

And friends I made with a different styles too

The moment whe you realise

That your breathing 

And you haven't stopped in the race

Falling down from an airplane

With no parachute or something to stop the crash

No, this does not end here

The odds may be agains but I'm againts them

Take me down and I will keep trying

No matter how many times I have to get up again

Take me down and I'll keep trying

Take me down and I'll keep trying

Take me down and I'll keep trying

Take me down and I'll keep trying....

Reviews

[Daisy]

wow great take me down and I'll keep trying
even to say this takes great deal of strength.....

[Lizardo]

thank you so much for reviewing, And yeah it takes!

[Cool Girl]

Very wonderful:) It reminds me of one of the poems I wrote a few weeks back.

[Lizardo]

Thanky you so much! :)

[Cool Girl]

You are so very welcome! Wow, I just commented on 7 of your poems :P Lots and lots of typing :)

[Ana B.]

A very intense write, a sweet and strong reminder to keep holding on, because there is always something to hold on to. Beautiful :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Ana B. I really appreciete it !

[Matching Socks]

There's great strength in this character, perseverance.
I think a few set backs and good knocks just make you smarter, stronger.
Definitely learn from it.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Ana, I really appreciate it!