The Moon

Oh moon...

You shine so bright

At night

With your light

You are the heart

Of the lovers that are apart

A symbolism of Love and hope

You are the light

That shines at night

You were made 

To be the light

In the darkness 

Of earth

The stars can't match your light

But they are far away

While you are close to me

I see you at night

I see the stars at night

I see hope in darkness

Not even a cloudy sky can stop you from shining

Oh moon

You are the light that gives us hope tonight

Throught the endless trials at night

You are the beacon in the lovers heart

You are the light in the darkness

Author's Note

As I said, Trying something new

Reviews

[Daisy]

It's great.... i do love the moon light whenever i am sad... but these days its so cold here....

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!

[Cool Girl]

Very very true! I love the moon and the stars; they make me happy:) I like how you tried something new for this poem! Nice job:)

[Lizardo]

thank you so much :)!

[Cool Girl]

very welcome is what you are! I have no idea if that made sense :P

[jacob erin-cilberto]

some good parts to this where there is subtle rhyme...but some of it also feels a bit strained to get the rhyme...a bit forced...i would shorten it and make the rhyme a bit more subtle..maybe use some near rhyme instead of exact rhyme. just thoughts....i really like the idea.

[Lizardo]

Alright, Thank you a lot Jacob!