Home

Wait....

You're going to slow...

There is no time

Wait... Just Go

The beacon is showing me the way

A way that never dies

It lights up the night sky at me

showing me the path

To get back home...

Home...

Home

Why are you so far away from me?

Why was I needed to be born in a diferent country?

Home, That you hold my family

Tears....

Drop from my cristal eyes

You can taste sorrow in them

And my head feels numb

Stars...

Shine my night

With their light

At the park

Showing me the way

Back home...

Home....

Why are you so far away?

Why was I needed to be born here...

I miss you so much

Home

That I see you in my dreams

With the priceless happiness in me

Home...

I'm going home....

I'm going home....

I'm going home....

I'm going home...

Author's Note

I really miss my family

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

fascinating!

poetry is not the science of time travel (history) but someone with the audacity to chronicle
how time travels. I love this....how home can be a calculation not just a place in space; a country
or region or town. Loneliness can make the journey worth the wait, I assume. " I calculate
to do it or perish in the attempt" Mark Twain said.

Like your other poem "Tonight" there is this burden of sadness that obviously you are struggling with.
(personally not poetically). Poetically your on the right path....Personally I have so little to offer.

well done....I'll be back often.....dana

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I really appreciete it !

[Cool Girl]

You're apart from your family!?!? That is really sad, I'll be your family! We can be virtual siblings/besties!!! xD Love the poem though:) Especially the ending:( It's gonna make me cry...

[Lizardo]

Well I only live with my grandmother, she's everything I need in this world to be, jaja we can be xD

[Cool Girl]

Oh, that's cool:) Yeah, we can xD

[DoormanDan]

I could really feel the sadness in every word of this poem, and I can kind of relate to this. I'm adopted, and haven't seen my birth family in years, and I miss all of them. This is yet another strong, beautiful poem Lizardo. Don't worry, you'll see your family again someday :)

[Lizardo]

I hope you too Dan, Thank you a lot :)

[DoormanDan]

Anytime man :)

[Cool Girl]

Im adopted too! Gotta wait till I'm 18 to meet me folks:(

[Cool Girl]

The hard part is that I know they were in the Navy and I know I have at least an older brother and sister:( Super hard for me to wait...

[DoormanDan]

I can understand why it would be super hard, but don't worry. The closer it gets, the faster it will start to approach. I hope everything goes alright once you turn 18 :)

[Cool Girl]

Me too, I really hope they don't hate me or something xD

[DoormanDan]

I don't see any reason as to why they would hate you, it's not your fault that you couldn't see them before. :)

[Cool Girl]

haha, yes I guess so:)