Why Do We Write?

''We let it go of our past to keep moving forward'' -Lizardo Arias

A sparking fire from our heart

We write the deepest desires from our mind

Our imagination floats

On the endless space of our thoughts

In the deepest part of our mind

We search for the experiences we had

To let it all go

From our heart

To share it with our friends

To show them what we've been through

Writing is the oasis in the desert

The angel in our hard times

The supernova in our space

Do I really need to keep going?

Author's Note

I have no idea how my experiment is going, but I'm sure of something,
I suck a rhyming

Reviews

[Marie]

Rhyming is not for everyone,
But Cool Girl and me--
Just because we match our words,
That's not poetry.

[Lizardo]

Thank you for your review Marie, I really appreciete it

[Cool Girl]

Haha:)

I write to get my feelings down
Otherwise I'd sink to the ground

- I think that rhymes XD

I like your poem, it was good!

[Lizardo]

Tha would of been good for it xD
Thank you so much!

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

rhyming is not necessary to make a good poem...this poem works really well, the fifth stanza especially good---all of us who write share this feeling...

it is what we do, it is what we have to do----it's our make-up...

jacob

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Jacob, I really appreciete it