The Devil May Cry

Corruption carrying fear through the day

With the endless Disgust of the rain

He left you in a pool of endless pain

The falldown made you

The falldown made you shine

The devil may cry 

At the end of the pain

A gust comes through the day

Carrying the weeps of 

The crying human souls

The night corrupts the souls

And the tears burst into waterfalls of pain

The weep has made you shine

The sorrow made you shiver

The devil may cry

At the end of the Night

Day and Night

Keeping you off track of your paradise

The dice has been rolled

The judgement is yet to come

And the devil may cry

At the end of our lives

You will shine through paradise

So shine you'll leave him Blind

Author's Note

I tried somethin new ( I think)

Reviews

[Jimmy Yetts]

A bit obscure in parts--but then, I guess that is the way of modern poetry.
I'm with you, though, Lizardo, I hope, ultimately, to see the devil cry.
Keep writing, young poet!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Frankie!

[Cool Girl]

Haha:) It is new, different, and extremely well written! Nicely penned!

[Lizardo]

Thank you, I finally check twice my work xD

[Cool Girl]

XD you're welcome!