Meltdown

Going up going down

there is no other way around

Passing through the town

Where the dreams are broken down

Life is like a mask party

Everyone hidding their realself

Trying to be someonelse

Walk through walls around

Its a different way to turn around

Up and down 

Thats life

Like a death game

Everybody is striving to live another day

In this miserable world where everything

Seems to crumble apart secons by second

There is something wrong

Why The heck do I need to help?

Are the words of us humans sometimes

But we dont know

That even a little dot can make real diference

World by world

Everything is falling down

It's just a matter of time before chaos wins our battle

Darkness rises through earth...

And the only sound we will hear are the weeps of a crying heart

Lonely and beating down the Soul

There is no time to run

Its now or never

Better die off like martyr

Then a coward

Human by human

Taking down each other one by one

The only that matters for them is

The power to destroy human soul

Tear by Tear

Is a circus of time

Its only moments when everything falls down apart

Shot by shot

Everyone striving to be Perfect

Humans crying around the world 

But it seems like that doesn't matter now...

Its only moments when everything falls down apart

And the only sound we will hear the weeps of a crying heart

Before the Meltdown of this crumbling world comes

Reviews

[Vishuddha]

The dying world, the old world, shrieks and struggles, moans, complains, kicks and makes some mighty sounds. Everyone tries to pretend it isn't dying, tries to be perfect to prove it isn't dying, needs a mask to cover up reality. But, the Meltdown is making room for the new future which does not have to be based on destroying, on control, on taking down each other one by one. Forget about the dying world. Consider what to feed the world which is quietly struggling to arise.
Beautiful poem.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, Really thank you

[DoormanDan]

This is strong poetry here. It really has it's own atmosphere, and definitely stands out from other poems. Good job, you never fail to impress! :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Dan, I really appreciete it :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wonderful truth and wisdom in this write. Powered by your inspiration...:)....

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Sami, I really appreciete it :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....