First Impressions Of Earth

The Humans from another Universe already know how to travel in the multiverse and then there was John.

One of the smartest humans from the Multiverse, he was the one who made possible traveling through diferent dimensions and what we like to call ''The bridge'' To other dimensions and Multiverses.

His earth was diferent from ours, They made a nice society were everyone would live in peace with each other, almost like a perfect society.

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In the field, There were a lot people singing and shouting waiting for their heroes to go to the spaceship and sail to unknown worlds.

''John, Do you have everything ready?'' his wife said

''I already do, don't worry just another simple task'' he smiled at her and off he went with his crew

The crew:

John, The smart one

Charles, the prime minister of defence

David, The president of earth Maximun Sirius(earth)

Abraham, The Militar Mayor of earth

''David, We will soon go to earth A1, Do we have everything ready?''

''Yes John, we have everything'' david said

''Is everyone ready?'' he asked

They all nodded

''Alright then lets move on'' 

the Door to the spaceship open and they entered the ship preparing all controls to go

''Can we do the countdown john?'' Abraham asked

''That is really old abraham, we dont do that anymore'' he started laughing

''Worth a shot abraham'' Charles said

The ship went to full power and they took of from earth, in 1 minute they were already reaching the exosphere

''Abraham, Shoot The Bridge'' John ordered

Abraham shooted from the ship a ball of glittering metal to space and a portal formed popping out diferent colors in it. The ship made its way to it and after 30 seconds in the worm hole they already reached the Solar System

A Hologram of the solar system pop out in the main room showing all of the planets and their masses with their names on it

''Earth A1 is right here, 2 planets before the sun'' Charles said

''Alright gentleman, We will park this at Earth's exosphere and drop the pods to give us a view of this earth''

In less the minute, they pass Neptune, Uranus, Saturn,Jupiter, Mars until they reach earth

''Deploy breaks'' David said

the ship stopped 

''Abraham, Drop the pods'' John said

abraham let out more than 1,000 pods to earth (They are little cameras)

''what kind of star is that one? (refering to the sun)'' Charles asked

''It's a G2V type star, a yellow dwarf  and a main sequence star''

''they call it, the sun'' John aswered

''Alright Everyone, The pods are ready to give us a view of the Earth, lets get to the Map room'' Abraham ordered

They made their way to a dark with green glowing light room where they were maps of the multiverse.

A flat screen appeared and everyone sitted down

''Is everyone ready?'' John asked

Everyone nodded

''alright then, Lets see what is so special about earth A1''

The screen started showing the images of what was happening now in earth:

Screams

Emotions

Wars

Fights

Everyone striving to survive

People killing their own race

the goverments

Childs being born

bombs explodind

the discover of the continents 

The world wars

Every single point of the history of earth pass through their eyes

until the video stopped

No one said a word of what they just saw until John said:

''Further searching is requiered to this type of earth, this worst from what we thought

This people can barely live in peace in such a dangerous world''

''Abraham call Main control At our Maximun Sirius, Our earth, and tell them to bring more ships''

''Tell them that we need to search for more answeres and to bring our armada, but in disquise''

''Tell them, That we saw The First Impressions Of Earth''

Reviews

[DoormanDan]

This story, overall, is great. You definately know your astronomy. The paragraphs could be a little longer and the story could use more description, but thats all that needs some improving. Its a good read! :)

[Lizardo]

Than you so much! And I'll improve it happy 2015

[Cool Girl]

This is very interesting and clever! Nice job:)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! :)