A Short Poem

I want to Live

Where the Universe meets itself

And believe on the faith that I have

Withing myself

And feel

Feel the presence of peace around my heart

'Cause in my head there is Sorrow station

Where My thoughts go to far off destinations

Where they can be happy and feel the presence of peace

Running around like first born child

With so much hope

That its invisible

With the spark of my heart

Feeling every defeat and Win

Remembering

The ride that I had to the station

With the fights

That I carried on and my past

My past making me carry my world

Dimension through dimension

A run Like there's no tomorrow

I do everything I can

To feel her presence again

I do believe its true

That there are ghost in my room

Watching evey movement that I do

Through darkness waiting to steel my hope

Like a tiger ready to strike

Is Sadness with my happiness

Surprising me at every corner of my life

'Cause my happiness only depends on me

Nobody else can depend from it

When I get to the hopeless airport

Where the flights

Come and Go like the dreams

Of the people of the world

And my quest to feel happiness

Is taking time

But I think I'm finally find it

It only takes time

Reviews

[Jamie]

the descriptions in this are ace! Great work!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Jamie and happy new year!

[Jamie]

You're welcome! You too!

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

I love it, and love your descriptions. Especially the analogy of depression as ghost in your bedroom waiting to steal your hope.(you put steel it should be steAl, typo) Aside from that I love this piece, thank you for sharing with me.
-BB

[Lizardo]

Oh god I miss that, thank you so much!

[Don't just B, but B amazing!]

Your welcome, good job.

[Jimmy Yetts]

The ninth stanza is extremely poetic, Lizardo--almost a poem, by itself.
Very fine work!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Frankie!

[DoormanDan]

This is officially my favorite poem of yours! You've outdone yourself this time Lizardo! This poem is just pure creativity :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much DoormanDan! :)

[Cool Girl]

This is really beautiful, Lizardo. I again can't find words to describe it....please enjoy my silence

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Cool Girl, Really thank you

[Cool Girl]

You are so very welcome!