The Last Thought

So there I was

On the ground

I turned around

And all I saw was a Holocaust

(The shouts and The sound of the guns rumbling from the field)

A man

An Enemy 

Was loading his shotgun 

To kill me

The man started walking at me

His pace was slow

''It all ends here'' he said

I started remembering everything that was once told to me

We Fight for our rights

(The man started to walk faster)

Life is about being happy and making a stand againts evil

(He took out his gun aiming at me)

If there is love a human heart, then I think we can survived

(He started pulling the triger)

Remember that we all love you, no matter who you are

You are part of the great family that forms earth

(the man pulled the triger)

(more shouts and screams came from behind)

At night

We all dream about our biggest desires

And we'll dream that we're making a Scape....

Author's Note

I'm really on the war things this days for some reason
And this is kind of a second part of the one that I wrote yesterday called ''The scape''

Reviews

[Rhia Barton]

I like this poem a lot, it almost reads like a story!

[Lizardo]

It's like a poem-story jaja, Thank you so mmuch Rhia and happy new year!

[Rhia Barton]

Happy New Year to you too!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

This is very cool! Very touching I like it a ton! keep up the great writing!
Very awesome!
Keep up the good work!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much C.Lee!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Your very welcome1