This is great! A lot of people only believe in what they see. But then why do they believe in things such as love or time? Sure you can see the effects, but love and time are not physical objects. Something your poem has made me think about.
Love it :)
Appreciate the topic, and an enjoyable read. Reality is infinite, and yet also very finite.
I'm at a point in my existence (notice, I don't say "life" but "existence") of finality, and so hence desperation. I know my future's my past, that all my future cycles will be identical to those of my past, therefore, how much time do I waste, before pushing The Representative harder?
It's heartbreaking: to have awareness of reality's true state is to know how easy it is to take it for granted -to just continuously spend one's cycles living the same identical routine (as satisfying it may be), while other human beings around you suffer, getting ruthlessly taken advantage of.
Reality is large, it is gigantic, it is beautifully expansive - yet it is also heartbreakingly finite.
The reality of 'The Representative' is too great to keep going on unknown.
Thank you so much The Representative, And yes we usually get tired of doing the same routine but it .. read moreThank you so much The Representative, And yes we usually get tired of doing the same routine but it only depends on us if we want to keep it doing or do something diferent
9 Years Ago
Routine, per se, is fine. Seeing the sun, each day, walking reality's ground each day, past its tree.. read moreRoutine, per se, is fine. Seeing the sun, each day, walking reality's ground each day, past its trees each day; each day, seeing both the Springhill road and Vicarage Rd (both roads which ascend); taking my usual break, near to the Springhill Pub; experiencing the same thoughts, that I have, at the same usual points in time; getting to enjoy, and to protract the experience of my consumptions of beverages each day:
Per se, there's all the beauty in the world to be experienced with routine, just as long as it's natural, that it's part of nature's intention.
Routine is nature, but so is progression. I yearn so much to fulfil nature's overarching intention.
I basically got from this that reality is whatever we want it to be, regardless of how unrealistic the things we think of are. Just like the rest of your writing, this is a brilliantly well written and thought out one. I really like it! :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you so much DoormanDan! I really appreciete it :)