The Escape

On night we dream

of our best and deepest dreams

Dreaming is like eating honey

It's so beautiful and delicious

We lay on bed watching the sky

and we dream of making a scape

A scape that will take us to unknown adventures

(The sound of bullets coming from outside the house)

But in this chaotic world

How am I going to have peace?

How the people of the world are going to have peace?

When chaos is almost ruling the world...

(The Door breaks and the footsteps come closer)

We can't even have a peaceful night without having a problem

And we can't be in peace when

People tend to critizice you

(The footsteps come closer)

My son I need to save you

Thats why I'll hide you under the bed

And hopefully those ignorants won't find you

I'll give my life for you

Because you are the light of the world

A child of the universe like all the ones in the world

(They break the door and start shouting)

(the sound of bullets coming from behind)

(The women drops to the floor)

And with our last hope...

We will dream of making a scape

To unknown lands

where we can find peace and happiness...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

dreaming can be a lot like eating honey---we might wake up feeling a little sticky...but it's worth it.
especially if we eventually find peace and happiness in the end.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Very true!

[Lizardo]

That's the whole point of it, you could of said any better Jacob

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Your an awesome story teller! This story has such a impact to me! THIS story has MAJOR potential!
Great poem Lizardo!
Keep on writing!

C. Lee Battaglia

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I really apprciete it C.Lee

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Your welcome. Please check out my book called the link to reality. I think you would like it a lot!

[Lizardo]

I will right now!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

did you read it?
If you would, Please leave a review.

[Lizardo]

I already did it! don't worry

[Ally]

So this is a wonderful poem, but I think you are a WONDERFUL storyteller. It was so vivid in my mind. Great job!:)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Ally! I really appreciete it :)!