Another World Love

Another World Love

A Poem by Lizardo

It's been a time since I saw you
I can't remember where
But I saw you
Time passes by
And you're not with me

I can't see you
I don't know why
But I just cant

I know you are in my mind
Remembering all the good times we had
But now, you're not with me
Reading books by the window
Watching how the raindrops
Yell your name

I just know you're not with me
I thought I saw you by my window
When I went to check
My fear began to grow
You weren't there

My dreams about you are beautiful
I just can't seem to forget you...

I don't know how this works
I can't see you nor hear you
But I feel your prescence with me

My memories seem to fade...
It won't be too long before I forget you
And the tunnel that I'm walking
is taking me to the light
And you are fading away from me...

When I wake up
I won't remember you
But see my tears and pain right now
Just to show how much I loved you
Goodbye....

© 2014 Lizardo


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This is a crystal clear example of sad poetry at its finest. The word deliver the emotional message very well. Have three imaginary waffles for writing this nice piece! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

( I love waffles ) Thank you so much DoormanDan! Thank you a lot :)
Deep emotion effectively portrayed.
There is a noticeable improvement in technique, here, Lizardo.
Congratulations!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your support frankie! I really appreciete it Friend :)
Such a feeling of longing and loss in this one Lizardo.
Tugs at my heart.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

I had the idea of doing this poem when I was listening to a song, and I remember about something,read more
I know this feeling too well. I can't ever really seem to let go though. I write songs, cry, make up stories, believe the lies I tell myself, but nothing works. Great job capturing the pain here. This could've made me cry If I wernt so excited right now:) great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Cool Girl! I reall appreciete it :)
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

You are so very welcome:)
OUCH, felt every memory, every vision, every sound reading this one. Oh how the loss of love is a long struggle. Great job thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing!

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Added on December 28, 2014
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Tags: Love, Poetry, Life

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