When It Was Now

Trouble falling down

Like raindrops of the rain

Problems come hovering by the side of your heart

To make the pain

Go faster then the smartest

And it is what is was

When it was now

A glimpse to the

Pas-Present

Hope has gone mad

Nothing you can do to make come back

Running around like a little kid asking for atention

But you don't even mind to pay atention at it

And that was yesterday of right now

Time seems to fly

this days are starting to get worst

Maybe it's time to change our ways

Of explaining something in the wrong way

Happiness and Sorrow

Walking by your side

Both of them fighting for you

It would be nice if one of them was really good

But that was yesterday of right now

A long walk it seems

I know it's very long enough

But I can't start to explain

how all of this happened at once

And Humans have been afraid

For more than 21 Centuries

But we have done nothing to stop it

It seem as everything from yesterday was now

Every single second passing by

The world is either thrown to ignorance

Or is being save by intellence

everysingle thing happening in the universe

Seem as if it was now

When it was now...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

intelligence should save us...but instead it makes us too greedy and competitive...and the heart loses out.

[Lizardo]

Exactly, You coudln't of said it any better jacob, Thank you so much for the review!

[Cool Girl]

This is one of my favorites from your whole collection of poems. I just love all of your writing! Like no joke here😜 If you stop writing, I will cry....

[Lizardo]

Then I'm not going to stop writing haha, Thank you so much Cool Girl!

[Cool Girl]

You are so welcome!

[DoormanDan]

This is a brilliant piece, and is my favorite one of yours so far. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but those never affect my review. As long as I can understand what's being said, I let it slide. Once again, good job! :)

[Lizardo]

I'll fix them, And thank you so much DoormanDan!

[Jimmy Yetts]

Everything does happen Now, because Now is eternal.
Solid science, Lizardo.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Frankie!