Take Off Your Masquerade

I'm tired of everyone

Lying at him self

Thoughts and memories

You can't deny come bursting

Out of your mind like a comet

Traveling through a tremendoues

High speed

Do me a favor

And take off your masquerade

I hate people who are something else

What you only see is them smiling at you 

With a happy face and gaining your confidence

But when the moment comes

They'll strike you with a lightning bolt of lies

That will hurt you to the deepest part of your heart

The masquerade that you use is very clever

Most of us don't see it

Because with you

Playing the happy and friendly game of yours

To us

How can we really know who you are?

So do me a favor

And Take OFF YOUR MASQUERADE

I don't like being lied to

And don't acept people

Who wan't to be someone who they don't are

Just to gain your confidence and Strike you

Reviews

[sweetvalorie]

I love this one. False fronts are found too often and are just lies. I like your wording through out this one.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much sweetvalorie!

[Rea Sky]

Oooh this is full of emotions that points out the lies and pretense of people around and I like the last part! Gain your confidence and strike you. There sure are some people like that. But I hope it's not the case around you
This is cool.
All in all, it's a good poem that can grow into a much more intense yet beautiful one

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Solaris! I really appreciete your review :)