What happens.....

First comes a blessing of all that you dreamed

You feel so happy that you can't sleep

The power runs throught your veins 

But then comes the endless pain

You loose all of your real friends

Because of the curse of the diamonds and rings

When the new ones come

You see that they are only interested in your jewerly

A greedy man you become

Hatred runs through your veins like the rivers in pain

And all your family goes to waste 

The streets that you walk are insane

Who can you trust?

When you lost Love

For your material things

After climbing so high

You are brought down to the darkness again

everything the goes up

Once has to go down again

Alone you are with nothing to be heard

You made this to yourself

And everything you work for goes to waste

Because of your monsterness that runs through your waste

Wasted time on your material things

When you should have brought happiness

To your Families

It's about to be christimas 

And you'll spend it alone

Because of your mistakes

Reviews

[UQ]

your karma getting to you.
nice work indeed.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much

[Jimmy Yetts]

Last stanza sums it up rather nicely.
Emotional write, Lizardo.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, Frankie

[Cool Girl]

I do enjoy this piece very much! Umm, in the last line "you're" should be spelled as "your." I thought you might want to know, no biggie though! Great job otherwise:)

[Lizardo]

Ah Okay i'll fix it, Thank you so much :)

[DoormanDan]

Anytime! :)

[Cool Girl]

You are very welcome:)

[DoormanDan]

Greed can lead to anybody's downfall, no matter who that person is. You go t that point across 100% in this piece. I really enjoyed reading it. Good job!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much!