When We Feel Sad...

When we feel sad

It feels as the world stop moving

And we're stuck in Numb

Our happiness had been taking away

as fast as a thunderbolt

And has been stolen 

Like the precius Diamond of a museum

When we feel sad

Nothing to us matters

Were just in....

There's really no words to describe

How we all feel when we are sad

We see the world in black and white

We love nothing

Nothing seems to be good enough 

To gain our love

It seems as were stuck in an

endless pit 

Drowning in the darkness

Of our Sadness...

Reviews

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Great piece but I feel as though its kinda flat. Like you weren't sad when you wrote this. Just my opinion. But its overall very true. Good job.

[Lizardo]

Yeah you're right, but thank you though

[sweetvalorie]

You really have a way of describing feelings. Well done.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much

[Jimmy Yetts]

It does, indeed, often feel like "drowning."
Heartfelt work, Lizardo!

[Lizardo]

thank you so much frankie