The Pianist

The story tells about a young boy

Who's name has been forgotten

But his ability to play piano still

Lives in the heart of many Pianist

The young boy was 9 years old when 

He first played the piano

He was terrible a it

every single day he tried and tried

Until one day he gave up

''Can't do this''  he said

He went outsie of the house and layed on the grass

He saw an old man playing a piano 

He wen to him and spoke with him

''Old man, How can you play the piano with such beauty?''

''Please show me, sir''

The old man gave an easy look and told him

''I just kept practicing until I got it right'' he said

The boy wen't back to his house and started playing the piano again

One day his father came and told him that

He got him in to a instrument show and the winner

Would win a trophy

At first he didn't like the idea but then he showed

Happiness for it

Again, practicing and practicing

The big day came

He made it in to the finals againts a boy

Thats was 20 years old while he was 9

The boy played a guitar

The young boy played the piano

And so the Battle begun

Sounds Where coming everywhere from both of the instrument

None of the both gave up

The sounds of the piano and guitar where heard throught the whole city!

Until it seemed as the piano boy was about to give up

The 20 year old drop his guitar and fell to the floor

After that

The young man stop playing the piano and said

''Thank god I never gave up''

''Most of the people were all againts me, they always would throw to the back

Because they said that I suck at this''

''But now I thank everyone who enjoyed our melody with my friend here''

The young boy received his trophy

And he went back home

Author's Note

I made this story up and figured that it would be good if I made since I love playing the piano, I usually do that in my free time.
I hope you like it

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

I play piano too! I'm a music lover:) This is a wonderful piece...Great Job!

[Lizardo]

I jus love playing the piano, Thank yo so much

[Cool Girl]

You are very welcome:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we can see your love of piano resonate in this...

really strong feeling in your poems....work on spellings though---it takes away from the impact----stops the readers' momentum.....

i like how the competitors really end up helping each other.

[Lizardo]

Alright I'll fix that and thank you a lot Jacob! I really appreciete it