What If

What If

A Poem by Lizardo

What if I took the wrong decision
And I would be dead by now
What if stop talking to me
I would feel really sad

What if I try something new
You never know until you try it
What if I got what I wanted
But not what I needed

What if I had every possibility in the world
And I wasted it

I'll take a deep breath and try to put it Aside

What if You were with me
But I would be someone else

What if really everything is made for a reason
Then I should stop complaining

What if I made a mistake
Witch for that I could be made Fun of
What if My heart was like a glass
So delicate it could break
I don't wan't to pass through that again

I'll take a deep breath and try to put is Aside...

© 2014 Lizardo


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I got an idea from this poem that instead of complaining and regrets we should act with what we have.
Excellent write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Really like this, "What if?" has got to be the most depressing question someone can ask themselves and you capture that sense of regret perfectly here. I also got a sense of loss and potential from this that I really enjoyed. Great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I really appreciete it !
there is a lot of really interesting ideas in here, we can't just tell ourselves all the time "everything happens for a reason" because that is not the complete story, is what I gather you are saying, we complain because there is something that needs to happen, that is our motivation, I hear the last part as an exhortation, " I'll take a deep breath and put it aside" we should do that, when we have an alternate task to complete,

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

You are right, Everything happens for a reason but it's no the complete story because after we reali.. read more

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