The Calling

The urge to wake up from his bed

''It's a calling'' he said

Without thinking it

He ran to the front the door and blasted it open

He ran through the streets of the city 

Until he stopped for a moment watching all the people 

Walk in the plaza

It seemed as if time had stopped

''Whats..happening..'' He said with a shaky voice

The scene changed and now he was in space

Watching the Galaxies and Stars

Everything seemed beautiful

Until he saw a girl 

And the girl was praying for help

His intincts told him he had to go save her

Whatever the problem was

He jumped to the square where it was showing the girl

But the scene change again

And this time he saw everysingle problem 

The the humans have comfronted

Since the existence of them

Everything he was watching

Was like watching a bunch of photos passing through

A screen

He woke up again 

This time with a sword in his hand

Fighting a dragon!

When he smashed the sword in the dragons head

The scene change again

This time he was clibming a mountain

But fell down to the endless darkness

The history of earth pass through his eyes

Now he saw everything in earth happening at once

Good and bad

Then he was put in a maze

A maze the he couldn't solve

and he saw other people with him at the maze

But when he tried to talk to them

They dissapeard

After that

The scene changed for the last time

Now he was a white room

Everything was the color of white

It seemed as if it didn't have an ending

He saw a black place

It was a division 

The white one was heaven

The black one was hell

And the people of earth stood in the middle

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

This is really pretty:) I don't know what to say. Again, too good for words, so just appreciate my silence..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

[Lizardo]

hahaha thank you so much!

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the mix of fantasy and reality works really well in here....--i think you meant "instincts"

but here is one hero trying to save the damsel in distress....in dreams we manage to do it...in reality, the world won't let us....we get beaten down and find no distinction between heaven and hell...
everything is a blur.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much, I really appreciete it

[Sami Khalil]

"Fighting a dragon!
When he smashed the sword in the dragons head
The scene change again
This time he was clibming a mountain
But fell down to the endless darkness
The history of earth pass through his eyes"

A good and enjoyable story that is confronting...Bravo........

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Sami for you review

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)............................