Conquering The Highest Moutain

He was laying down on the snow

As the flickering snow covered his body

He felt terrible, sick, and sad

''I can't....give...up...''  

With all of the effort in the world

He said those words

With his elbows, he was moving 

Through the mountain

He could barely breath

'' I can't... give...up..'' 

Again those words

Until he gave up

The snow and the height of the mountain

Were too much for him

It seemed like all he worked for

Had been taken away from him

But something woke him up

It was a strange voice

it said

''Don't give up!''

The man got up

He felt his heart warm

And got up

With all his might and power

He ran until the top of the mountain

Nothing he could care about

Was more than conquering the mountain

When finally he reached the top of the mountain

He yelled to the whole world

''Let me be the light of the people!''

''Let them know what I did''

''Never let them give up''

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nice analogy---life is the mountain and sometimes our feet and arms get too tired from the struggle and want to give up...
but something keeps us going to get to the top...hope? faith? determination?

what we want to accomplish we may with enough toughness of character.

[Lizardo]

Thank you and yeah, I think the three of them: Hope, Faith, and determination, but I mean its life isn't it? it's like a rollercoaster one day you on the top of the world and the next day your thrown down to darkness and so the cycle goes on