Four

Four

A Poem by Lizardo

Four times to take down the bank
Four times to feel the solidness of the rock 
Four times for what it was Solid

The four times you grew into something new
Four times to give up
Four times to bring you ship back abroad
The four elements 
The four evangelists

Everything has to do with the number of times 
You try something until you get it

The four states
The four major philosophical periods
The four sides of the square

Everyone has a number of tries to do something right
and mine is four
Yours could be something diferent

© 2014 Lizardo


Author's Note

Lizardo
i'm really sorry if it doesn't make sense.
I just thought about it

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Okay so I have an idea! We shall start a trend! Anyone who reads this comment is going to write a poem abut a number and list things that include that number just like lizardo did here! And each poem must end with the same stanzaa. (so if I did 12 as my number: Everyone has a number of tries to do something right, mine is twelve, yours could be different.) This will help the trend to continue by urging others to write a poem about a number!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

I really don't think it trended... haha
I believe this piece might have been the start of our .. read more
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

I think that maybe yes :)
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

haha... xD
I really like it. It's deep,man.. lol:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Haha, but it's interesting.:)
Lizardo

9 Years Ago

jaja, thank you :)
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

you're welcome:)
I love this, it's very inspirational

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lizardo

9 Years Ago

Thank you, i still think that it doesn't sound and look good though

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