Desiderata

It's the first book that i have made, i'm sorry for the grammar mistakes. I know its the book that anybody wouldn't like to read, and i know that it's not perfect, but, i tried something new. I got inspire with the book ''A catcher in the rye'' by J.D Salinger.
I hope to hear some constructive criticism and what should i improve for the next book that i'm planning to write. Thank you for taking your time and reading this not-so- perfect story, i really apreciete your time.