Light and Darkness (depression)

I feel a state of loneliness

I feel i cannot scape from this

My love for the pleasures of life has gone

My love drowned

Now, i can only hear the dripping sound of water 

coming from the pipe, i hear comfort from this

The light thas has faded away from me

The darkness that comes towards me

My heart crushed by the little things

that gave me away

But, now i can see Light at the end of the tunnel

The darkness fades away, the pipes dripping water 

doesnt comfort me now

Now, i see light everywhere, in every human soul, there is light

The depression that kept me from seeing the beutifull things

about light

And i left the darkness of depression, forever

Light always defeats darkness

Hapiness always defeats depression

Reviews

[luvs2write]

Very true...I like how you took your reader on a journey through this poem. The grammar mistakes are a little distracting, but I understand that everyone has at least a few grammar mistakes in their writing. "Light always defeats darkness"...something I need to remember. Nice work, keep writing!!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much