saying goodbye

Saying Goodbye

by matt kauffman

So soft the brief touch of your lips on my cheek. Was I almost intruding? "Look after yourself " should have been "I love you!" Then the Jumbo flew over my head and I shouted my love above the roar and thundering thrust . . . as if you'd hear. Through the clouds in my eyes I watched you fly away and wished I'd been born with wings

Author's Note

leave comments and extream critisim welcome

Reviews

[MandarinOranges]

loved it! seriously.

Through the clouds in my eyes
I watched you fly away
and wished I'd been born with wings

i don't have any criticism to give you. you have painted a vivid picture, a sad tale of silent love. excellent!