Chapter 1: Skyler

Chapter 1:Skyler

One day I  was sitting in my room. When I heard a message on messenger. I thought it was odd for someone to text me. I’m just a nobody and people are always calling me names.

I checked the message, to see what it said.

“Hey, I know that you think that you are a nobody, but to me you are a somebody.

What the hell? Why is this guy texting me? And why is he saying that I’m a somebody.

In case you're wondering, this certain guy is the most popular guy in our school. His name is Dameon McCamey. Why is he saying he likes me. This has to be a prank.

“ Are you being for real because no one likes me. You’re also the most popular guy at our school.”

“ Yes this is for real. I really do like you and i was wondering if you like to eat with me at lunch tomorrow.”

“ How do I know that this not a prank”

“I’ll prove to you if you sit with me tomorrow”

“ I guess that I can bc I have no one else”

“Thank you, see you tomorrow”

What have I got myself into. Deep down I feel like something wrong with this, but I can’t back out now.

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Reviews

[Karen Redburn]

Easy flow, and good writing. I have a few suggestions, but not sure how appropriate they are in texting. My writing is old school :) Use what helps and dump the rest:

What have I got myself into. Deep down I feel like something (is) wrong with this,

“ How do I know that this (is) not a prank”

“Hey, I know that you think that you are a nobody, but to me you are a somebody. (end quotation mark)

Good job, I'm worried for her also!