My love

You let me write pages and pages of my thoughts and never judge.. even if my thoughts seem silly and maybe sometimes selfish you never tell me what i cant have or that im not good enough to accompish the most outrageuse dreams. you keep my secrets locked inside you, never to let anyone take a peek, you are my life and altought i might fall in love with someone else i will never leave your side. you are me and what i wish to be, i see my kids telling you there secrets about how much they cant stand me & sometimes how much they are just glad to have me, i know you will take care of them as you do me & even when im old and gray, & married... poetry you will be my one and only.

Reviews

[Livia]

It was a love letter in the form of poetry.

[Jennifer Ryan]

Very sweet but still I have the same issue with the structure. It seems more like an excerpt of a love letter than a poem.

[Kimmee Jean]

I love it. Very interesting piece. I would like to have seen it a little longer but i love it.

[Johnny Westbrook]

your poetry is your diary, your diary is everything that is YOU. perfect write. great job.