All of me.

All of me.

A Poem by Livia

You say hello and instantly i remove my mascara. We talk all night on the phone, deep conversating and laughing.. there goes my eyeliner. The next day a picnic in the park next to a lake forces me to remove my eyeshadow. Later that night a candle light dinner you made yourself allows me to remove my blush. You take me home and walk me to my door, a first kiss and i remove my foundation, showing you... all of me.

© 2011 Livia


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It was really cute :) I liked it a lot

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great write! this is exactly what i think true love is, being appreciated for the real you. great job! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem. it shows you opening up little by little, being able to just be you, being comfortable around him. Lovely write. Keep up the writing. I expect to read a lot more from you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Livia
Livia

Wadsworth, OH



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A Poem by Livia



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