All of me.

You say hello and instantly i remove my mascara. We talk all night on the phone, deep conversating and laughing.. there goes my eyeliner. The next day a picnic in the park next to a lake forces me to remove my eyeshadow. Later that night a candle light dinner you made yourself allows me to remove my blush. You take me home and walk me to my door, a first kiss and i remove my foundation, showing you... all of me.

Reviews

[Bellarina]

This is quite a simplistic and powerful piece. It's difficult to toss comparisons into writings and have it make logical sense at times, but I believe you did very well on this. Good job.

[Alice Crypt; Brittany]

awww, really sweet poem, although I agree with jennifer ryan that it kind of doesn't line up with one

[Jennifer Ryan]

I agree the metaphor is sweet although the structure of this doesn't really line up with a poem but over all I think the effort was nicely done.

[Aya Fayyad]

i wasnt sure where you were going with this, until the metaphor picked up in the middle. very sweet poem :) i like how you played with it!

[topsyturvy]

Wow that was very well written, and sweetly done. It's not all the time I come across a poem like yours, and I must say, it's refreshing. :) Great job, it was a beautiful write :)

[Cherryblossom]

I like what you did with :) very well written.

[JaceJordd]

i like that , very different than what most people write .

[Jessica]

I love the metaphor with the makeup. It's very... I can't really find the word I'm looking for right now but I'm feeling it :)
Awesome poem

[Amanda Naomi]

hmmmm, very sweet, i like it :)

[none]

The true beauty of a girl lies with that of a natural look, make-up is overrated. Your beauty is to behold, slowly giving to show the true you. Good read.