The Girl

The girl that sits by the lake with a guitar and sings

The Beautiful girl that has had boys that are fools never trust one

She always holds in all of her tears for at her house

You can learn from her like to be Truthful,faithful,but mostly to be true to yourself and go for what you Believe in..

Author's Note

this is my first pome so I hope you like it

Reviews

[QuillandInkWhispers]

I like it but you need to edit the poem and work on it a little bit more. The last 3 lines do not make any sense. Make sure you always edit before posting a poem. It doesn't have to be perfect. This is why members review the work, to let you know what can be change to make the poem better. Keep Writing!