Im hoping

Im hoping

A Poem by amanda

i keep rewriting over the same page hoping and hoping
what's underneath will disappear 
every day i hold my hand
be the one i crave to have 
while everyone is used to projecting their problems upon me 

how can you get rid of the negative people in your life
when you wouldn't have anyone
if you did

© 2021 amanda


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Wow. This was breathtaking, a sucker punch. It just felt so true and honest and that it can just be so difficult to be honest even in your own work, but the emotions here are palpable and intense, and written so, so well! This is going in my favorites, and hopefully I’ll see this published one day! It’s amazing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


amanda

3 Years Ago

Oh my, thank you so much! that means a lot :))
You and I are the same. I am far from sixteen now, but still we are the same. I recently had to cut out my own parents, because I realized they were making all of my problems worse.

Posted 3 Years Ago


amanda

3 Years Ago

It sucks because of all people, those are supposed to be rock solid.
light and ashes

3 Years Ago

Absolutely.

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