From Good to Bad

Just the other day,

It was bright and right.

I was running around

Without a care in the world.

Why do all good things always have to end,

So soon?

Nothing can ever be in such a perfect state.

Good times, turn to bad.

The sun always sets at the wrong time.

But maybe the wrong time is what is right...

Author's Note

Okay, totally NOT revised, or anything. Finally something came to my mind after over 3 months of intense writers block. I'm only posting this becuase i finally was able to write something smoothly...enjoy, I guess.


Ps, I just realized, I always contradict myself in my poems, hehehehe sorry.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

The sun always sets... Nice write.

[Daydreamer54]

WELL IT'S TRUE ALL GOOD THINGS COME TO AN END....you expressed that well in this piece. :)

[Valentine]

Isn't that just like all of our lives today??? Honey we all are going through the same things across this whole world..We need a big chance aand jobs for all, less wars, and more happy people..only God can give us all of thewe things..lola nd God bless..Kathie

[Aussie]

So true. My daddy always tells me "Things don't go right in life,and you can never count on anything except change; and whether the change is good or bad,it always happens and you can sure as hell count on that"
This makes me think of that,and it makes me smile(:
Fantastic work.
100/100

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This is a good poem. It is so real. I really like it.