Save me from myself.

Sitting here,

Alone.

Staring blankly out the window,

Doubting myself.

 

Not knowing what to do,

Where to go,

Who to call.

My heart is on the shelf.

 

There's only one thing you can do,

To help,

Save me from myself.

Author's Note

That was totally on the spot, written in one minute.
It just kind of came to me.

Reviews

[nostal]

Powerful and grabbing, yet short.
Very nice.

[The Wave]

short but strong

says alot with so few words, loved the flow too
overall, written well, liked the rhyme and the feeling is relatable! nice write,
good job

[cheeeeese]

Simple poem, but it says alot. And I can totally understand poem that are written on the spot, that's the way I usually write, and I find that poems that are written that way are usually great. You did an amazing job in this short piece, very well done! :)

[Life is A"Musing"]

Like this a lot! It has a nice rhythm, as well as being relate-able :D

[lindsay]

Doesn't it always seem like the best things come, when aren't really thinking?
This shows it.
Short, but meaningful and lasting.

Great job!

[[untitled]]

This is good. Nice job.

[Akina]

great written, so nice to read, and it's really amazing :)
good job.

Akina

[Bud]

An Excellent write! Has a Great flow to it...a point that can be absorbed! Keep up the Outstanding work!

[Jared Hughes]

That's usually how poems appear, they come to you. Usually when I sit down to write a poem I can never find words to say what I feel. It's only when I feel the emotion that I can write it. You can never force yourself to write something. I think if anything it should come to you. Anyways, good job with the poem.

Jared Hughes

[Lydia]

This poem is really nice. Your flow is great and emotion apparent. Great job.