Waiting

Waiting

A Poem by Livenrite

Rain trickeling

Its tapping clouds my mind

Symphony playing

Its music soft and kind

Cold wind howling

Bad memories to unwind

Fireplace crackling

Its warmth is hard to find

Tears falling

Its blur makes me blind

I'm sitting here...

Waiting.....

© 2011 Livenrite


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Change the Its to It's. Vivid imagination though I like the rhyming idea behind it as well.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 10, 2011
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Livenrite
Livenrite

Brooklyn, NY



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I am Lieba B.W. and this site is my sanctuary:) Love being a part of this writing community and I hope you enjoy my work:) Cheers! more..

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