His Little Girl

The beautiful starry sky 

reflects on her dress' white

All eyes are turned to her

As she's swaying in the night

Her father cannot believe

his little girl has grown

and how much she matured

a personality of her own

He wishes he didn't have to

But he must let her go

off into the gigantic world

her own seeds to sow

As the groom steps forward

the dad's face as in a trance

Tears streaming down his face

He ends the father daughter dance

Reviews

[Vartul]

Oh,very sorry.You mentioned in your about me that you're a girl.Hadn't paid enough attention.
I'll only say this about this poem-I'm a fan. :)

[R. Nella]

Damn depressing poem this one. I really like it.

I can't wait until it's my turn to take someone away from their father. I apprehensively look forward to the day when my own daughter, should I have one, leaves me as well. It's a part of life I dread, but at the same time wouldn't want to miss for anything.

[azlamalo]

In the eyes of every dad out there :) cuute and sweet