Survival of the Bravest

Life and its most appreciated calm

Like the lake that glistens

Floating along and enjoying

Giving direction with hand's palm

Rocks begin to obstruct the path

Playing catch with the body

Struggling to take control 

To evade the rushing river's wrath 

There is no room left to think

The water is moving faster

Survival's all that matters now

Trying not to give up and sink 

Head above the water is shown

To enable one glance ahead

Sight of the water just ends

How to prepare for the unknown?

Plunged into the great waterfall

The bottom is nowhere near

But the force is getting stronger

And drowns the desperate crying call

In the fall's cycle. round and round

Seems as though no way out

Cranking up survival's fight

To ultimately beat the water's pound

Though twisted, broken and swirled

The brave survivor was part of 

The great waterfalls heavy impact

That gives maximum power to the world

Reviews

[Revolutionary]

The style is unique in the way you rhyme the first and fourth lines.I love the way the river comes to life.I could picture her throwing stones at me

[azlamalo]

awesome!!!