What I'm Thankful For

Lying in the sun, I'm thankful for...

The green grass that taught me

It is always greener on my side

The roses that never fail to show me

Thorns always come with its beauty

The small hummingbird that told me

A song can bring peace to the mind

The bees and flowers who represent

That you can find friendship anywhere

The blue sky's clarity and generosity

Allowing clouds to invade and make a storm

And the rain never fails to give life

To all the things that I'm thankful for

Reviews

[Liza]

this is magnificent
thank you for sharing

[Vartul]

Beautiful.Don't change it,its wonderful as it is.So,you're a girl.Your profile didn't mention it,n I thought that you were a boy.Not that it matters,but I think I'll be more careful in my reviews from now on.Girls are delicate.

[Livenrite]

So I was wondering if I should change this piece...maybe add a rhyming scheme or add more things I'm thankful for...let me know!

[azlamalo]

This is definitely one of my favorite from all your pieces

[Sara]

what a lovely poem! by reading it, it just brightens your outlook on life... :)

[TTBoy28]

You are really thankful! I really like this. One correction - add "to" between clouds and invade. I feel your imagery!

[Stacey Watts]

Very beautiful the words are very inspiring and thoughtful. I like the way this flows as you speak from the heart. Well done.

[Honey]

What a beautiful and uplifting poem! It's always nice to read about things that make people happy. The ending was perfect; it wrapped the poem up with a cute little bow. Very nicely written...good job!